Friday, 1 November 2013

I'm not dead!!!

It's been a while...

The reason for my absents is that I lost all of my characters and I have to remake them all.
Another reason is that I lost my inspiration (manly because I didn't get any feedback).

But fear not I will return....I just have to recreate all of my characters and I have made up my mind, I am going to go on mainly because I like my story and it doesn't matter if don't I get any feedback.

Thanks for your time
-Neelie

Tuesday, 2 July 2013

Operation Snake Eye: Chapter 7


At Jenny's apartment that night.

*Jenny drifted away into a deep sleep. Dreaming about the past. Soon she would live it all over again...*

At an academy for spies. 5 years earlier.

Beth: "Jenny you should come and take a look at this."

Jenny: "What...What!?"

Beth: "That looks like you in the picture."

Jenny: "That's because it is me and those are my parents."

Miss Twilight: "What are you doing in my office?"

Jenny: "What is this? Why do you have a picture of me and my parents hanging on your wall?"

Miss Twilight: "Oh, well, uhm."

Miss Twilight: "There is no hiding it anymore...Jenny I'm your mother."

Jenny: "Why, How...I mean why didn't you tell me. They told me you and dad where in an accident."

Miss Twilight: "I'm sorry Jenny, it had to be done to keep you safe."

Jenny: "Why bring me to this place? Do you know how hard it was for me knowing that both my parents were gone from my life not to mention all of the foster homes I got kicked out of!"

Miss Twilight: "Jenny I'm sorry."

Jenny: "No leave me alone I don't want to talk to you right now."

In a cellar underneath the academy.

Daisy: "Hey we have been looking for you everywhere."

Rona: "Why so sad Jenny?"

Jenny: "It's nothing."

Rona: Well if it's nothing why aren't you drinking?"

Jenny: "What are you talking about Rona?"

Rona: "Look around you...This place is filled with wine. C'mon Jen have a drink with us."

Daisy: "*hic* Anyone else *hic* want another *hic* glass?"

Jenny: "No thanks I think I had enough."

Rona: "You can never have enough of a good thing Jenny, never."

Jenny: "Well right now nothing is as good as it seems."

Rona: "Who hurt you Jenny?"

Jenny: "Nobody....Actually there is someone..."

Rona: "Let me guess it's Keith right. Don't worry there are plenty of fish in the sea..."


Jenny: "No it's not Keith."


Daisy: " *hic* Then who *hic* is it?"

Jenny: "I found out that my mother is still alive and that she is here at the academy."

Daisy: " *hic*?"

Rona: "Who?"

Jenny: "It's Miss Twilight..."

Rona: "No way!"


Jenny: "Yap."


2 Hours later.

Jenny: "Something doesn't smell right...."


Jenny: "Guys get up! We have to get out of here! Now!!!"

Daisy: "*urggg* What's going on...Ahhh, fire!!!"

Rona: "What's with the yelling?..Oh no!"


Rona: "Daisy!!!"

Jenny: "What happened!?"

Rona: "A piece of brick fell on her!"

Jenny: "Hang on I'm coming!"

Falling bricks

Jenny: "Daisy, Rona, No."

Keith: "Jenny we have to get out of here!"

Jenny: "No, Rona and Daisy are in there."

Keith: "It's too late c'mon."

Melody: "Jenny! You're save!"

Britney: "Where is Rona and Daisy?"

Keith: "They didn't make it."

Jenny: "Where's my mother?"

Eliza: " *crying* She...she..."

Beth: "I'm sorry Jenny. The ceiling was coming down and she pushed me out the door before it all came down."

Jenny: "NOOO!!! Just when I got her back...I...I didn't even have a chance to say I'm sorry or to tell her how much I missed her even though she abandoned me.."

Keith: "Jenny, I know that I can't say anything to make this better but just remember I'm here."

Ring-ring. Ring-ring.

Jenny: "Hel...hello?"

Britney: "Jenny the DNA results came back...It is Daisy's."



Friday, 28 June 2013

Operation Snake Eye: Chapter 6



Back at HQ

Britney: "So did you guys find some more information that might help us out on this case?"

 Jenny: "Me and Beth found out that the Golden Cobra eggs lead to a Golden Cobra statue."

Beth: "And if it's found it can give anybody who looks into its eyes unlimited power."

Jenny: "Thing is we don't know if this is true."

Melody: "Well if it is true, I have discovered two places where the other eggs might be: Alaponga and an Island that is unnamed somewhere deep in the ocean."

Jenny: "So what do we do Brit?"

Britney: "This is difficult. Things like this are not to be taken lightly true or not. We will have to get the other two eggs before the other person gets their hands on it. Jenny you Melody and Beth will go to one of the locations. I'll send another team to go to the other."

Melody: "My gut tells me that we should go to Alaponga."

Britney: "Then it's settled I'll arrange a plane. You go get ready for the trip."


Alaponga.

Jenny: "I really hope that the egg is here. It would get us one step closer to figuring this all out."

Melody: "The map says that it's in a cave right in the centre of the island."


Beth: "Over there!"

Jenny: "There it is."

Beth: "We have to be careful, there could be traps."

Melody: "Well we got this far and we're still alive."

Jenny: "Maybe luck is finally on our side."

Woman: "I count on it."

Beth: "Who are you?"

Woman: "*laugh* You don't remember me? Well I guess that's what you get when you don't keep in touch." 


Jenny: "Well we might know you or not...What are you doing here?"

Woman: "Wow you may have lost some of those things you call brain cells since I last saw you...It's actually pretty obvious. I'm here for the egg."

Jenny: "I don't think you know what a rhetorical question might be. Ohh well, you're not getting that egg."

Woman: "Wanna bet? Get them boys!"

Melody: "Jenny go for the egg we'll get them!"


Woman: "Well, well, what do we have here, a tie?"

Jenny: "You're not getting this egg."

Woman: "Oh I'll get the egg alright. You wanna know why?"

Jenny: "Why?"

Woman: "Because you let the past get in your way...Just like your mother did." 


Jenny: "What!?"

*kick*
Woman: "See I told you. Finally I have the last piece of the puzzle. Let's go boys..."

Beth + Melody: "Jenny!!!"

Beth: "Don't try to stand up to fast."

Jenny: "I don't get it. Who was that?"

Melody: "She seemed to know us, but I can't remember her."

Jenny: "Damn it. She got the egg. What do we do know?"

Beth: "There is still one left."

Melody: "Yes there is, but first we have to get back home to make sure you're okay."

Back at HQ.

Melody: "And unfortunately she got away."

Beth: "But there is still one left."

Britney: "About that, the other team reported back...The egg has already been taken."

Melody: "What know?"

Britney: "I...I don't know. Where's Jenny?"

Jenny: "I need you to do a DNA scan on this piece of hair."

Saturday, 15 June 2013

Operation Snake Eye: Chapter 5




 Jenny: " So what have you found for us Melody?"

Melody: "Well as you can see here there are a total of three Golden Cobra eggs in existence and all three link to a certain artifact. Unfortunately I don't know what the artifact is?"   

 Jenny: "Well it must be important if whoever is looking for it is willing to kill people in the process. Any Idea how we can get some more information?"

Britney: "I'll make a few calls. Someone has to know about these eggs and artifact."

Melody: " I'll see if I can hack in to the Art Museum's inventory list, maybe I'll be able to know where that egg came from."

Jenny: "I'll go see if I can find Beth, she and I will think of something to get more information."

Britney: "Yes, I'm calling to hear if you can help me out with something."

"It's been a long time since we heard of you. What's so significant that you had to call us?"

Britney: "We are working on a case and we seemed to hit a rut. You know that I wouldn't call you if I didn't think this was important."

"E-mail me the deeds and I'll see what I can do"

Britney: "Thanks, bye."

Jenny: "Hey Brit..."

Britney: "Yes?"

Jenny: "Me and Beth are going to the library. They have so many books on agrological stuff, we might get lucky."

Britney: "Every bit of effort can get us closer to what we need to know, good luck." 

At the library...

Beth: "Excuse me miss."

Librarian: "Can I help you?"

Jenny: "Yes actually you can, we are looking for some information about the Golden Cobra egg?"

Librarian: "Like the one that was stolen from the Art Museum?"

Beth: "Yes, please."

Librarian: "Why not just look on the internet?"

Jenny: "We did but we didn't get anything that we were looking for."


Librarian: "*sigh* I'll go check."

Beth: "Wow, helpful much?"

Jenny: "You're telling me."

Librarian: "This is all the stuff I could find about snakes, cobras, cobra eggs and eggs."

Beth: "Thanks for all the help."

Librarian: "Whatever."

Jenny: "It's been three hours and we still haven't find anything. Let's just give up."

Beth: "Wait, I found something."

Jenny: "What? Let me see."

Jenny: "There are three Golden Cobra....yadayada...Oh, these three eggs are all linked to the Golden Cobra statue. It's said that the Golden Cobra was made by the Snake-God when he felt defeat closing in on him in 200Bc. He was very powerful and so made this statue to store his power so that it won't be destroyed with him...."


Woman (Red): "He wanted someone to take over in his place so he created three clues leading to the relic. Only the smartest and most malevolence person would be able to obtain this great power...."



Woman (Brown): "So when you gain access to this power, what will you do with it?"


Woman (Red): "What do you think someone with unlimited power would do? I'm going to get my revenge and then take over the world creating it in to my image *Mwahahahahaha*."

Beth: "It says in order to gain this power you must look in to the snake's eye."

Jenny: "If these scrolls are right we'll have to get to the artifact first before the other person gets their hands on it."

Beth: "We'll have to do it fast too."

Jenny: "C'mon we have to get back to HQ and report in."